Friday

Sorry

The ghost of guilt catches Jennifer's tears as she scans for memories and photographs. Lonesome and troubled with many sleepless nights, she fails to comfort her bruised and broken heart. Did selfishness overstep the mark? And once his final words sink in they hit every damn nerve. Sorry you are gone. Jennifer is so sorry.
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  1. Laura Eno7 February 2010 at 13:42

    Are you posting your stories to #fridayflash? If not, you should be. :)

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  2. Marilyn Simpson7 February 2010 at 14:05

    No, I'm not but I will. Thank you. :)

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  3. Unknown8 February 2010 at 17:27

    I liked it too. I'm going to dive into your story now.

    Mike Griffiths

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  4. Marilyn Simpson8 February 2010 at 17:33

    Thank you. Big hugs. :)

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  5. Anonymous9 February 2010 at 23:56

    Hi Marilyn

    Some of these little flash fiction pieces feel as they are part of something bigger.
    Are they loosely linked or previews of something larger?

    N

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  6. Marilyn Simpson10 February 2010 at 10:14

    Hi.

    This one isn't part of something bigger, but I'm working on a couple of other flash fiction pieces & they will become larger stories.

    Thanks for reading. :)

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  7. Jodi MacArthur20 March 2010 at 17:56

    Hi Mariyln,

    This flash is so haunting and full of regrets. Great work in so few words.

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  8. Marilyn Simpson21 March 2010 at 10:39

    That means a lot coming from you. Thanks Jodi.

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