tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post3824905416583751553..comments2023-03-25T12:05:31.899+00:00Comments on Notes from Underground: The SculptorMarilyn Simpsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-4027265667828827402010-08-09T21:05:45.605+01:002010-08-09T21:05:45.605+01:00I liked this one too. Very tight. Not a wasted wor...I liked this one too. Very tight. Not a wasted word. You have a great sense of Micro.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-2977534105551366042010-04-02T13:53:25.845+01:002010-04-02T13:53:25.845+01:00Thank you. :)
Yep, sounds cool to me.Thank you. :)<br /><br />Yep, sounds cool to me.Marilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-18093164636351118652010-04-02T00:07:33.887+01:002010-04-02T00:07:33.887+01:00Let's see if my comment sticks this time.
Thi...Let's see if my comment sticks this time.<br /><br />This is a superb piece. Powerful imagery and a great example of "showing" not "telling" which is a bloody miracle in only 55 words.<br /><br />Maybe we should think about a collection of some of our better flash fiction pieces.Throg Niemandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15004656189738425187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-41969738016749621222010-03-29T20:49:12.060+01:002010-03-29T20:49:12.060+01:00Thank you Neil. :)Thank you Neil. :)Marilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-20391901938137830432010-03-29T15:28:59.686+01:002010-03-29T15:28:59.686+01:00Terrifying and vivid.
well done.
NTerrifying and vivid.<br />well done.<br /><br />NAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-62086250007170179682010-03-28T19:23:34.690+01:002010-03-28T19:23:34.690+01:00Thank you Sam.
Yep, my muse works like this most ...Thank you Sam.<br /><br />Yep, my muse works like this most of the time, just as your great muse like pixies mine like madness. ;) <br /><br />Think I need to borrow a pen. :DMarilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-25520146491431667702010-03-28T18:42:53.354+01:002010-03-28T18:42:53.354+01:00Ooh, very nice! To get so much into only 55 words ...Ooh, very nice! To get so much into only 55 words is a real skill...which you most definitely have. Vivid and unsettling, does your muse often work like this?! ;)Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-59158313358203269512010-03-28T11:52:14.832+01:002010-03-28T11:52:14.832+01:00Thank you for reading, Jacqueline.
Thanks Jodi. C...Thank you for reading, Jacqueline.<br /><br />Thanks Jodi. Comments from you always mean a lot.Marilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-48871973314502891662010-03-28T03:42:33.094+01:002010-03-28T03:42:33.094+01:00Your 55 word horror is fantastic, Mariyln. Sick &a...Your 55 word horror is fantastic, Mariyln. Sick & gorgeous at the same time. I love the last line.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-33138135672191456902010-03-27T21:11:57.033+00:002010-03-27T21:11:57.033+00:00Beautiful and masterfully done!Beautiful and masterfully done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256647602838483445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-54110786706851903562010-03-27T18:36:58.209+00:002010-03-27T18:36:58.209+00:00Marisa, thanks for reading.
Andrew, glad you thin...Marisa, thanks for reading.<br /><br />Andrew, glad you think so. :)<br /><br />Mr. Bone, thank you Sir. ;)Marilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14152306169095951674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-80038907477439030272010-03-27T17:21:37.625+00:002010-03-27T17:21:37.625+00:00Excellent work. Vivid and precise with so few word...Excellent work. Vivid and precise with so few words. I'm always impressed by your workUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07834284581326148759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-69674390425495009932010-03-27T16:07:08.871+00:002010-03-27T16:07:08.871+00:00Deliciously twistedDeliciously twistedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5318137073883301981.post-40071155798977904072010-03-27T13:28:51.685+00:002010-03-27T13:28:51.685+00:00In a few words you depicted quite well the artist ...In a few words you depicted quite well the artist as a mad man.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.com